Two words

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“One more.”

I can’t refuse. Even though I’ve had so many, my body screams for more. I press my legs together, then spread them. My labia are wet. Tender. Between them I’m soaking. Needy. My cunt begs for more.

I moan when his hand ignites my tender flesh. Three strikes, and another orgasm floods through me.

“Now you.”

Doing it myself is much harder. Three slaps, and his fingers find my clitoris, tipping me over the edge once more.

Again. Repeat.

Until I’m spent. Exhausted.

He leaves me there, a smile on my face because of two words.

“Good girl.”


Writing a story of exactly 100 words is quite a challenge. It’s a great exercise, as it forces you to look critically at what you have written, and dares you to keep to the essence of your story. Please feel free to join in, and if you do, you’re welcome to use the badge below, and link back to my page.


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15 thoughts on “Two words

  1. The most orgasms I ever had consecutively was 1/10th of the number you named in your linked post; it took eight hours and I was literally in pain when we were done.

    So OUCH is the first word that comes to mind.

    But if it works/worked for you: more power to ya.

    I hope you were able to get A LOT of rest afterward — you look zonked!

    1. Back then I could have so many orgasms, and if I think about doing that now… well I guess then OUCH is also what comes to mind… and, I was zonked then 😉

  2. I loved that image all those years ago … and it’s wonderfully sexy to see it again. Just LOVE it !!!
    And, of course, your words complement it perfectly.
    Very, very sexy Marie !!!
    Xxx – K

  3. Muy pero que muy excitante, las palabras y la imagen
    Y una escritura muy depurada.
    Tengo que probar
    ¿Es posible haerlo como invitado o hay que tener un blog en activo?

    1. You can try this too, Rafael, maybe in one of your guest posts on Wicked Wednesday? A nice 100-word story to go with one of your images? 😉

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