Ready view

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“On your knees,” I say, and push her forward.

Pushing her round bottom backwards, arching her back, she spreads her legs. The fabric barely covers her arsehole, and her puffy pussy almost spills out. I smell her arousal: mine twitches in my groin. Glancing over her shoulder, she wants to be touched.

I stay still, enjoying the view. I’m thinking of what I want to do… slip my fingers inside… lube her dark hole… slowly push my cock inside. My thoughts stiffen my cock.

She wiggles her ass, until a slap keeps her perfectly still.

And patient.

Now I’m ready.


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18 thoughts on “Ready view

  1. Es cierto que es muy difícil condensar en 100 palabras un relato tan sexy a la vez que sensual y sobre todo contundente,
    para mostrar finalmente una bellísima imagen en esa posición tan sugerente de entrega y sumisión.

    Sencillamente perfecta!
    Me he quedado extasiado.
    ¡Enhorabuena!

  2. I must confess to being transfixed by your original “blue” … but both showcase that beautiful bottom !!!
    And very sexy scenario to imagine from your words !!!
    Xxx – K

  3. Oh Marie that position is so sexy and very fitting of the words that accompany it. I share May’s thoughts that you have an amazing bottom.

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