Being seen

Upon their arrival she dresses in the chosen outfit, while he drags a chair towards the hotel window. It overlooks a busy street from the first floor, and is level with an even busier pedestrian bridge.

He positions her on the chair, her breasts and bottom bare, her naked body a picture in the window frame.

People see.


Heads turn away and hurry on; others stand and watch.

Today he exposes her exhibitionism. Together they throw off her cloak of shyness. She pushes her breasts closer to the window, unleashing her inner slut.

Their staring eyes set her free.

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© Rebel’s Notes

20 thoughts on “Being seen

  1. Es muy muy excitante el morbo ser visto y no visto. La esencia de la exhibición.
    Pero lo que mas me gusta de todo.
    Es el estilo depurado de tus letras para clavar las 100 palabras y crearnos una imagen mental de dicha excitación.

  2. Well done, once again! Love this image and how you paint the scene, showing us what’s outside while we’re busy taking a peek at what’s inside 🙂

  3. Very hot. I have been exposed in a window, more than once and sometimes blindfolded. It’s always with out the blindfold that’s better/worse lol

  4. My BBW is a bit of an exhibitionist, but it usually involves a drink or two but no more than three. She really enjoyed you post. Her comment was, “I wish it was more than 100 words”.

    Master Bill

  5. I could see myself wanting to do this (in a big city, far away from where we live)….I do have a bit of that exhibitionist streak in me…..

    1. There is something exhilarating doing this, but I will definitely not do it at home either 😉

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