The coarse carpet fibers beneath my naked body are forgotten as I retreat into myself. I’m alone in the dark world of my closed eyes.
My hands roam my soft flesh, my hard nipples, my wet cunt. Each touch reminds me of my want, my need, my lust. One hand on a breast, the other reaches for the glass dildo. My wetness lubricates the smooth head, my tender walls welcoming the intrusion.
“Fuck yourself,” he says, briefly reminding me they are watching from the light.
The bulbous head hits that special spot again, and slowly tips me over the edge.
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Very erotic, sensuous, and sexy! Loved it.
Thank you, Jacques 🙂
There is something super erotic about being watched… I love how his interjection brings that added layer of intrigue.
I love this idea – and u have put it across brilliantly as ever
May xx
Another delicious foray into the mind of Marie! MMM indeed!
Very sexy image!
“Dark world” as a closed-eye description I is spot on!
And such a delightful thing that dark world can be…
Delicious photo and hot 100 words, “Fuck yourself,” he says, briefly reminding me they are watching from the light. I loved this…
Thank you, glad you liked it 🙂
Ooh yummy! Looking damn good yourself!
*blush.. thank you!