Mischief shone in her eyes.
It shouldn’t, having been pushed to her knees, presented with his erect cock. She wanted to submit. Craved it.
But, she needed him to force her. Control her. To hold her head down, while she gagged on his cock. To only let her come up for a breath of air, then push her head down again, using her mouth as a fuck hole.
Holding his cock, she planted a silly kiss on the purple head, teasing him.
His hand snaked around her neck, and pushed her down, only briefly allowing her a gulp of air.
Writing a story of exactly 100 words is quite a challenge. It’s a great exercise, as it forces you to look critically at what you have written, and dares you to keep to the essence of your story. Try it!
© Rebel’s Notes
I also smiled at the image and the way it worked with the title. And I love your short. You managed to pack so much into such a few words and definitely said what wasn’t there as well as what was if that makes sense. Fantastic. X
Thank you, Missy. I keep on challenging myself for these short ones and feel they improve my writing, because of the editing 🙂 xox
Love the rawness of your words – great image too – made me smile
May xx
Thank you, May xox
You never cease to amaze me! I’m loving your micro bites of deliciousness each week!
Thanks, MrsK, I really love writing these. I write, then I edit… and getting it to 100 words is all the fun… and work of course 😉
Very sexy words Marie … AND, of course, very sexy photo !!!
Xxx – K
Thank you, K xox
I suspect that “silly kiss” was not so silly… 😉
I think she soon found out how silly she was to be so silly haha
Hot image and post Marie!!! Have a great Saturday!
Thank you, and wishing you a good weekend too 😊