My legs, clenched

Womanizer between legs, a perfect toy to use when you want to sleep a bit more.
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My eyes still closed, the longing first entered my awareness. A moan escaped my mouth when I clenched my legs together, and I instantly opened my eyes.

I was alone.

Alone in the silence, the ear plugs keeping the world out.

I wanted to sleep more, but was also desperate to quench the thirst. Soon I turned on my side, a toy trapped between my legs, covering my clit. I hovered in a state between sleep and wake, while my body ached for release.

Nipples hard, I moaned and moved against the toy until an orgasm finally woke me up.

Writing a story of exactly 100 words is quite a challenge. It’s a great exercise, as it forces you to look critically at what you have written, and dares you to keep to the essence of your story. Try it!

© Rebel’s Notes

Saturday Night Fever                    MMM Mondays

15 thoughts on “My legs, clenched

  1. Great Flash Marie – I agree about the 100 word flash – it is a great challenge. I do love writing flash fiction anyhow. 100 words is quite tricky but i will try for next saturday night fever
    May xx

    1. Oh I would love if you joined me in the 100-word challenge. It’s fun to do, and teaches you so much! xox

    1. I love doing them. They make me really pay attention to every word. I do like some of them better than others 😉 xox

  2. Challenge accepted.


    You just left the car.
    I feel empty. Half of me just left.
    I was wondering when I last
    Felt whole on my own.

    Was it when I was 16?
    No, I was searching even then.
    Was it at 22 when I was freshly minted graduate and on my own?
    No, I was lost and wandering. Trying whichever girl or woman would let my shoes rest on their floor.
    Searching hearts that weren’t yours.

    I lost track of the numbers that went before.
    Now there is only one.
    That longing, that search, is over.
    Now, our souls are whole.

    Ok you said a story, musings are easy. Let me work on that…..
    Marie, you are a great muse.

    1. I love what you have written here, David. Please do try the 100-word stories. They really teach you so much about writing only what matters for the story. Thank you for your nice comment 🙂

  3. I have tried to write in 100 words for flash fiction before and you are right that it is SO difficult. I am way too wordy but I loved your little flash. Great picture too – double flash. Have I missed another project from Mrs Fever? I must follow the badge and see. Missy x

    1. I love the challenge a 100-word story gives me. I am editing it over and over until only the most important words remain xox

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