My eyes still closed, the longing first entered my awareness. A moan escaped my mouth when I clenched my legs together, and I instantly opened my eyes.
I was alone.
Alone in the silence, the ear plugs keeping the world out.
I wanted to sleep more, but was also desperate to quench the thirst. Soon I turned on my side, a toy trapped between my legs, covering my clit. I hovered in a state between sleep and wake, while my body ached for release.
Nipples hard, I moaned and moved against the toy until an orgasm finally woke me up.
Writing a story of exactly 100 words is quite a challenge. It’s a great exercise, as it forces you to look critically at what you have written, and dares you to keep to the essence of your story. Please feel free to join in, and if you do, you’re welcome to use the badge below, and link back to my page.
© Rebel’s Notes
Great Flash Marie – I agree about the 100 word flash – it is a great challenge. I do love writing flash fiction anyhow. 100 words is quite tricky but i will try for next saturday night fever
May xx
Oh I would love if you joined me in the 100-word challenge. It’s fun to do, and teaches you so much! xox
A great way to start the day! Very nice work on the flash fiction, it’s a challenge but you make it seem easy 🙂
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I love doing them. They make me really pay attention to every word. I do like some of them better than others 😉 xox
Hot Marie! And love the photo! Happy Valentines Day!
Thanks, Mike, and Happy Valentine’s to you too!
Challenge accepted.
Longing
You just left the car.
I feel empty. Half of me just left.
I was wondering when I last
Felt whole on my own.
Was it when I was 16?
No, I was searching even then.
Was it at 22 when I was freshly minted graduate and on my own?
No, I was lost and wandering. Trying whichever girl or woman would let my shoes rest on their floor.
Searching hearts that weren’t yours.
I lost track of the numbers that went before.
Now there is only one.
That longing, that search, is over.
Now, our souls are whole.
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Ok you said a story, musings are easy. Let me work on that…..
Marie, you are a great muse.
I love what you have written here, David. Please do try the 100-word stories. They really teach you so much about writing only what matters for the story. Thank you for your nice comment 🙂
David – I love this flash!
May x
I have tried to write in 100 words for flash fiction before and you are right that it is SO difficult. I am way too wordy but I loved your little flash. Great picture too – double flash. Have I missed another project from Mrs Fever? I must follow the badge and see. Missy x
I love the challenge a 100-word story gives me. I am editing it over and over until only the most important words remain xox
That looks like a delightful little buzz ball. 🙂
(And orgasms are always a nice thing to wake up to.)
This toy still is one of my absolute favorites!