May 222013


A naked body in the bathroom
Curvy hips, a rounded bottom
Long legs, a hint of perfume
Breasts moving in perfect tandem
A thin line of hair, a slit
Rosy nipples, both semi-hard
Totally ready to commit
Watching them was a reward

Sitting down at the dressing table
She was a beautiful, delicate lotus
Showing some inner pink, I was able
To witness her delicious wetness
Leaning closer to the mirror
Her beautiful eyes, full and strong
Applying colors, readying for the altar
Watching her did not feel wrong

White clothes waiting on the bed
A corset, garters and some clips
No, not wearing anything in red
Yes, the panties, today, she skips
Stockings pulled on as over she bent
Legs spread, inner pink so wet
Showing off seemed to be the intent
Watching her, I did not regret

Her dress, a dream so beautiful
Shoes to complete the picture
After today, no more was she single
Forever she would be his treasure
One last look in the mirror
All ready for her wedding day
She smiled and took me with her
I am her wedding bouquet

© Rebel’s Notes

The prompt for this week’s Wicked Wednesday was:
write from the point of view of a wedding bouquet
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Marie Rebelle
Marie Rebelle is an erotic author and the driving force behind Rebel's Notes. She is creator of the weekly meme, Wicked Wednesday and coordinator of a Dutch writers group. She lives in the Netherlands with her Husband and kids and besides being very busy with her website and writing stories, she has a fulltime job.
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  14 Responses to “Watching”

  1. Like others have said, I love the voyeuristic feel in this! Those naughty flowers :)
    Penny recently posted..Woman in BlueMy Profile

  2. Wonderful. It was voyeuristic and delicious.

    Rachel x
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  3. I was really unsure about the prompt this week, mainly from my point of view but I have loved so many of these posts which is testament to you for picking something a little different and to all the bloggers who really are a bloody talented lot

    Molly recently posted..Because We Are HumanMy Profile

    • And I just loved your post, the way you used the prompt. And you’re so right about those bloggers out there: SO talented :)

      Rebel xox

  4. very nice, I like the deviant voyeuristic feel to this.
    Lord Raven recently posted..Dinner is servedMy Profile

  5. Beautifully done… I felt like a voyeur :)

    ~Kazi xxx
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  6. Oh that is just lovely!!!

    ~Mia~ xx
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