Big eyes

Written for the Erotic Meet competition:
Rabbit in the Headlights

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A cold shiver ran through her body, starting between the roots of her hair and running down her body, leaving her legs trembling. She held onto the door handle to keep herself steady. In front of her, two pairs of big eyes looked back at her. Her shock was mirrored in the faces.

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The young woman was excited as she opened the front door while the last chimes of the door bell still sounded through the air. They had been friends for years and just recently romance started to bloom between them. Yesterday they made plans to spend this afternoon together in her room. Both of them knew what this meant, but neither of them had spoken the words. There was only one tiny problem. This morning her mother’s all-day appointment was canceled and this kept her at the dining room table, working from home.

Holding on to the door knob and almost shutting the door behind her, she smiled and quickly kissed him on the lips. Her mouth moved to his left ear and she whispered that her mother was home. They entered the house, walking to the dining room where her mother was typing away on her laptop. The young man neatly introduced himself and with a firm voice the young woman informed her mother that they were going to study together for an upcoming test. Her mother nodded; her mind already back with her work.

The fact that there was a parent in the house, left the two young people – both just shy of their twenties – feeling uneasy once the bedroom door closed behind them. Sitting across from each other on the bed, they talked. About school. About their friends. About family. She expressed her disappointment and offered her apologies that her mother was home. He teased her, wanting to know what she had in mind. She smiled and blushed, not wanting to tell him what exciting thoughts she had. But they both knew. Their eyes locked together and both of them leaned forward at the same moment. They kissed softly, gently. Pulled away. Looked at each other. Smiled. He touched her cheek. She closed her eyes and sighed. Happy. Leaning closer to him, they kissed again, more passionate this time.

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The young woman moved closer to her lover. He opened his arms. She sat on his lap, facing him, her legs on the bed on either side of his thighs. She hugged him, kissed him. They both felt the fire burning. They both fueled the fire, wanting each other now and having wanted each other for such a long time. Their mouths were locked together as their hands started to explore. He pulled her shirt from her skirt, discovering her braless breasts, her excited nipples. His other hand wandered down to her crotch. She pulled his shirt from his pants but had no patience to pull it over his head. Her hands found his belt, loosened it, unbuttoned his pants and slipped his zipper down. She brushed against his erection. He pulled her panties sideways, finding her wetness and running a finger through it. Their eyes closed, their mouths kissing, their hearts beating… they lust after each other.

Slowly she pushed him backwards onto the bed. They pulled away from each other, taking a moment to search each other’s souls. Finding the same answer, his cock was freed from his pants and slowly slipped into her waiting wetness. In their virgin moment they became one. Moving together, pelvis meeting pelvis. Kissing. Holding each other’s gaze. More kissing. Fucking. Slowly. Building the fire of their passion to an explosive high.

They gasped in duet when they heard the door. Both felt the cold wave of adrenaline rushing through their bodies. Their heads were turned towards the woman at the door. They were frozen in their action, waiting for her reaction. For some seconds after she had left the room, they did not move. The young woman turned her face back to her lover’s, smiling. Just before her mother had left, she saw her expression changing from a rabbit staring in the headlights to acceptance. Her mother understood: she was not a child anymore.

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She opened the door. A cold shiver ran through her body, starting between the roots of her hair and running down her body, leaving her legs trembling. She held onto the door handle to keep herself steady. In front of her, two pairs of big eyes looked back at her. Her shock was mirrored in the faces. She closed the door as she left without a word. It was time. She needed to let go. Her little girl was not a little girl anymore.

ยฉ Rebel’s Notes

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Note added on 4 May: Thanks for all who have voted for my story. I won the “Rabbit in the Headlights” competition.

5 thoughts on “Big eyes

  1. This is clever and sexy!
    Really takes me back to my teens, that awkward moment when you knew your parent knew you were having sex!
    Eek ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Lily xxx

    • Ooooh yes, I can remember it so well too. I have never been caught, but can still remember how it felt to almost be caught!
      Thanks for your comment ๐Ÿ™‚ xox

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